1. Yes. Binge drinking needs to be stopped.
2. It states the problem but not the solution.
3. It needs to address the counter arguments. Get views on this issue from college students since they are most likely to fall to binge drinking.
4. Yes. It give interesting information on an important topic.
5. Split it into paragraphs. A good break is at "I think ..."
6. After you split it up, try to include more of your opinion.
7. Yes.
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